REVIEW: The Assignment by Evangeline Anderson

by Avid Reader on December 17, 2006 · 9 comments Tagged as:

in Book Reviews, Ebooks, Grade C Reviews

The Assignment by Evangeline Anderson (Loose-ID)Man Love. My first. Maybe my last. I just know that I couldn’t have a sur­feit of these types of books on a daily basis. Or any erot­ica that’s m/m,m/f, f/f or whatever. If it enter­tains, I’ll read it but erot­ica these days, compose very lit­tle of my read­ing diet. Mov­ing on. I bought this book because the buzz sur­round­ing it has been pretty pos­i­tive. Here is the descrip­tion for your perusal:

Detec­tive Nico­las Valenti has never had feel­ings for a man that go beyond friend­ship. But now he’s in love with his part­ner Sean O’Brien. There’s just one problem–Sean is straight. Isn’t he?

The Assign­ment was just aver­age for this reader. I had some seri­ous issues with Valenti’s part­ner, Sean O’Brien, claim­ing his het­ero­sex­u­al­ity while he was under­cover with Nicholas. The problem? I just didn’t believe it. See, the Assign­ment requires the two men to work under­cover together and pre­tend to be lovers in order for them to take down a dan­ger­ous crim­i­nal who hap­pens to fre­quent gay clubs, bars or what­ever. The prob­lem arises when Nicholas Valenti starts hav­ing some real, seri­ous feel­ings for his part­ner, Sean. I really liked Nicholas and I could under­stand his feel­ings for Sean since they’d been friends for years and were close. Thus, I had no prob­lem with his char­ac­ter or the way he was writ­ten. I felt sorry for him and I wanted him to have his happy ending.

The biggest prob­lem of this story for me was the way Sean O’Brian’s char­ac­ter was writ­ten.  The author wants the reader to believe Sean’s sex­ual explo­ration was noth­ing for him to think about twice. He did all the kiss­ing, grop­ing, feely stuff with another guy that would make one think twice that he was straight. However, we see Nicholas really grap­pling with his sex­u­al­ity and his feel­ings while  we see Sean  all out flaming. Rather than be per­ceived as a full blooded het­ero­sex­ual male as the author would like the reader to do,  Sean comes across as a man who lived his life in the closet and was finally let loose. I would never believe that he was straight. Never. Sorry. Just couldn’t. As the enve­lope was pushed fur­ther and fur­ther, Sean’s response was always: it’s ok, it’s for the job. Yeah, right. Tell that to some­one else. I just accepted that Nicholas fell in love with Sean but never thought him­self as gay. Sean just acted gay from the start. 

All in all, this book was about aver­age for me, C. Take heart. Oth­ers did enjoy it. I just didn’t think it was all that great. It wasn’t all bad. I liked the writ­ing. The story was some­what entertaining. Characterizations were decent. The author’s voice has a nice flow to it. Would I read any­thing else by her? Prob­a­bly not.

For Fur­ther Reading

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Charlene May 15, 2007 at 3:04 am

I couldn’t stand this book.

It con­tained every sin­gle slash fan­fic cliché in exis­tence ca. 1998. Every one of them, includ­ing ye olde (and I mean olde) fuck or die sce­nario. I wanted to trans­port the author back eight years and point out that rein­vent­ing the wheel was hardly necessary.

And come on: the pro­tag­o­nist is wor­ry­ing about whether his part­ner is really inter­ested in him while said part­ner has the protagonist’s dick in his mouth! Please. And a club named the Ram­Jack? What’s next — the CockOff?

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Teddy Pig January 2, 2007 at 1:27 pm

Don’t feel too bad, I am gay and a man and kept won­der­ing why Nicholas let Sean do all those things in bed with him. I mean they were not even frig­gin drunk, COME ON!

I just totally lost my abil­ity to any of it.

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Avid Reader December 21, 2006 at 10:05 am

[quote comment=“5055”]My inter­pre­ta­tion (heavy empha­sis on *inter­pre­ta­tion* here), is that before they devel­oped feel­ings for each other, they both had been het­ero­sex­ual. And then, what hap­pened dur­ing this book was that both had mostly accepted their feel­ings for the other to them­selves, but were not com­pletely sure the other was feel­ing the same. So, while Sean wasn’t quite ready to come out and say to Valenti that he was gay and hot for him (just in case he was read­ing Valenti com­pletely wrong), he was oth­er­wise doing all he could to show him.[/quote]

Hmmmm. I just thought the author would have did bet­ter to have read­ers know Sean’s thoughts. Sean really wasn’t as fleshed out as Nicholas (to me). I don’t think we got much of Sean’s POV, now that I think about it. Any­way, thanks for shar­ing your thoughts on this book., Rosario.

Jor­rie, I’ll keep those titles in mind when I’m in the mood for some­thing dif­fer­ent :-) Thanks, ladies.

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Rosario December 21, 2006 at 7:50 am

My inter­pre­ta­tion (heavy empha­sis on *inter­pre­ta­tion* here), is that before they devel­oped feel­ings for each other, they both had been het­ero­sex­ual. And then, what hap­pened dur­ing this book was that both had mostly accepted their feel­ings for the other to them­selves, but were not com­pletely sure the other was feel­ing the same. So, while Sean wasn’t quite ready to come out and say to Valenti that he was gay and hot for him (just in case he was read­ing Valenti com­pletely wrong), he was oth­er­wise doing all he could to show him.

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Avid Reader December 18, 2006 at 5:09 pm

Hi Rosario, there just wasn’t any acknowl­ege­ment from Sean or maybe I read that char­ac­ter com­pletely wrong. So, as I’m to under­stand it, Sean was already gay it was just Nicholas who was confused?

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Jorrie Spencer December 18, 2006 at 2:32 pm

Cool, Rosario. I actu­ally bought Vaughan’s books because of your reviews :) So I’ll be curi­ous to hear what you think.

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Karen Scott December 18, 2006 at 12:23 pm

I dont mind Man love, but I usu­ally pre­fer there to be at least one female inter­est. I’ve not been able to read a purely M/M romance yet, and prob­a­bly wont.

I read an F/F about eigh­teen months ago, and was so scarred by the expe­ri­ence, that I wont be dip­ping my nose in that pool again.

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Rosario December 18, 2006 at 10:42 am

Wow, Keis­hon, we really saw this one from dif­fer­ent per­spec­tives! I do totally agree that it would be com­pletely unbe­liev­able for Sean to be straight, but where we dif­fer is that I didn’t think Ander­son wanted to make us think he was. The way I saw it, Sean was doing all he could to show Nicholas that he was gay, gay, gay. Well, dif­fer­ent strokes, I guess!

And for Jor­rie: I loved the Vaughan book you men­tion, so I’ll be def­i­nitely check­ing out the other two you mention.

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Jorrie Spencer December 17, 2006 at 8:47 pm

Not that I want to push a sub­genre on any­one, but my fave m/m romances (off the top of my head) are JL Langley’s With­out Reser­va­tions, Ally Blue’s Wil­low Bend and Stephanie’s Vaughan’s Cross­ing the Line. I just really enjoyed the char­ac­ters in these books, and the romance.

I haven’t read Evan­ge­line Anderson.

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