REVIEW:The End of the Relationship: Shortcomings, Adrian Tomine

by Avid Reader on January 23, 2008

in Book Reviews, Grade A Reviews, Graphic Novels

Adrian Tomine - ShortcomingsOh, this was excel­lent. Short­com­ings is a graphic novel writ­ten and illus­trated by Adrian Tomine, pub­lished Octo­ber 2007 by Drawn and Quar­terly, 108 pages for $19.95, hard­cover novel.  Short­com­ings is a novel that focuses on two peo­ple who have more or less fallen out of love with each other.

The graphic novel touches on sev­eral issues that relate to race and relationships. The story is set in Berkley, California and mainly focuses on anti-hero, Ben Tanaka, a guy who is narrow-minded in his views in rela­tion to his own cul­ture and roman­tic ideals.

Asian-American, Ben Tanaka is a 30 year old col­lege drop out who man­ages a movie the­atre. His Japanese-American girl­friend, Miko Hiyashi is an event orga­nizer for the Asian Amer­i­can Digi-Fest.

When the story opens, you can tell that Miko is used to endur­ing her boyfriend’s neg­a­tiv­ity and indif­fer­ence. Despite his irri­tat­ing flaws, she has stayed with him for two years. The two of them argue a lot over Ben’s insin­cer­ity and his appar­ent “obses­sion” with “white women.”  The only per­son Ben can open his heart to is his les­bian friend, Alice Kim, a grad­u­ate stu­dent, who is a good match for Ben’s insen­si­tive remarks and dry sarcasm.

The roman­tic rela­tion­ship hits a cross­roads when Miko is is awarded a four month intern­ship in New York. She doesn’t ask Ben to come with her either and this doesn’t seem to bother him much because he doesn’t see it for what it is: a break-up. 

How­ever, they agree to a “time off” period and Miko goes to New York and Ben starts dat­ing a young blond named Autumn, who is a 22 year old the­atre clerk who is into punk and weird art. I had a WTF moment when Ben goes back to her apart­ment and Autumn shows him her “art­work.” Need­less to say Ben can’t keep up with the young woman and she rebuffs him anyway.

He then makes his move on another blond named Sasha, a grad­u­ate stu­dent who dumps him after a cou­ple of dates for her ex-girlfriend. After liv­ing out his fan­tasy of dat­ing a white woman,  he starts to miss his girl­friend. He calls her but can’t get in touch with her and this makes him upset enough to go find her. The three of them: Ben, Alice and Miko reunite in New York but it is not the reunion that Ben had hoped for when he flew to the east coast.

The graphic novel goes into many issues that we all can relate to and one must admit to know­ing some­one like Ben: always neg­a­tive, seem­ingly insin­cere, intol­er­a­ble to other view­points and a real pain in the ass. One won­ders why Alice tol­er­ates Ben. 

I liked Ben’s les­bian friend, Alice, a lot in that she refuses to live up to some false ideal.  Her parent’s dis­ap­prove of her lifestyle and wants her to marry, how­ever, Alice is resolved to the fact that she’ll never please her par­ents and she doesn’t waste time doing so.  I liked how Ben and Alice spar with each other. She often coun­ters Ben’s mood­i­ness and pre­dictabil­ity with her own impul­sive­ness and witty sense of humor.

The plot does have a few sur­prises in store for the reader and I enjoyed every word of this book. A quick men­tion on the art­work: it is sim­ply won­der­ful and the dia­logue is easy to read. There’s a bit of humor and stim­u­lat­ing con­ver­sa­tion between the char­ac­ters that makes you think.

I came away from the novel a bit sad because Ben’s life had been shook up and he didn’t know how to deal with the after­math of it. Yes, he was a jerk but the author man­ages to make me feel a bit of sym­pa­thy for him.  He goes through the usual emo­tions of rejec­tion and then finally, grim acceptance. I wish the author would con­tinue the story as I didn’t like how it ended: so coldly, so detached and so… realistic. My grade, A.

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