Reader’s Corner: Flashbacks, Love Them, Hate Them?

by Avid Reader on June 12, 2009

in Avid Musings

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Def­i­n­i­tion:

flash·back

noun
1. a device in the nar­ra­tive of a motion pic­ture, novel, etc., by which an event or scene tak­ing place before the present time in the nar­ra­tive is inserted into the chrono­log­i­cal struc­ture of the work.
2. an event or scene so inserted. –from Dic​tio​nary​.com

I must admit that as a reader I don’t really care for the heavy use of flash­backs. No. I hate them. I couldn’t explain to you the why of my dis­plea­sure with them only that I inwardly cringe when I run across them as they con­tinue to go on and on at length. There are excep­tions of course. Yes, of course! It would have to take a skill­ful writer to make me for­get that I am lost in ital­i­cized flashbacks.

As with every­thing, there must be bal­ance. If the major­ity of the story must be told in flash­backs then chances are slim to none that I’ll read your book or fin­ish your book. I don’t mind “flash­backs” when they are maybe a para­graph or two in length but no, flash­backs for me are a major PITA. What say you, the gen­tle reader about flash­backs? Love them? Hate them? Neu­tral? Yes, this post was inspired by a book I am cur­rently read­ing. That is all.

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Bookwormom June 13, 2009 at 10:58 pm

Whether or not I like them depends on how they’re done. I just fin­ished a book where every other (short) chap­ter was a flash­back. Not sure I think it needed to be done that way. I guess I lean towards not lik­ing them, but I’m will­ing to go with it until it gets annoying.

~Amanda

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Bev Stephans June 13, 2009 at 2:03 pm

@SarahT
I agree with your com­men­tary on Julia Spencer-Fleming’s, “Out of the Deep I Cry”. Come to think of it, she hasn’t writ­ten a bad book yet!

Most of the time, flash­backs are just irri­tat­ing. I can only think of a few books that kept me read­ing on to the end.

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Kaetrin June 13, 2009 at 2:07 am

It really depends on the story and how it’s done for me.

For exam­ple, Sherry Thomas’ books — Pri­vate Arrange­ments, Deli­cious (which I have read) and Not Quite a Hus­band (which I haven’t read — yet) are told in fairly large chunks of “now” and “before”. Her sto­ries are all about lovers reunited — so the “before” is when they met and what went wrong and the “now” is how they get back together. I gave it some thought when I read Deli­cious and I thought that if the sto­ries were told in lin­ear fash­ion quite a bit would have been lost from them.

But, there have been other books (none of which I can now recall the name of) where the flash­back scenes just irritated.

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JenB June 12, 2009 at 3:30 pm

I pretty much cringe any time I see more than one or two ital­i­cized sen­tences in a row, which means I’m not a fan of most flash­back scenes or dream sequences. I skim most short ital­i­cized pas­sages and often com­pletely skip extremely long ones, and so far I don’t feel I’ve missed out on any key ele­ments in any story.

I can tol­er­ate flash­back scenes in nor­mal type that are bet­ter incor­po­rated into the story, but ital­i­cized flash­back pas­sages give me hives. So I guess it’s not the flash­back itself that both­ers me so much as the font that sets them apart from the rest of the story and makes them appear optional.

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MF Makichen June 12, 2009 at 11:49 am

You summed it up per­fectly. It has to be done well and not a lot.

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Popin June 12, 2009 at 9:10 am

I just fin­ished a book that had a lot of flash­backs. I think if it’s done prop­erly and helps move the story I wouldn’t mind. What I don’t like is when one chap­ter tells you that you’re read­ing a flash­back, then when you get to the next one it’s set in the present time…only you find that out as you read the chap­ter since it wasn’t stated that you’re in present time.

~ Popin

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Jorrie Spencer June 12, 2009 at 7:39 am

Mostly I’m not crazy over them, but if they’re well done, I can actu­ally really like them. Big if though…

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SarahT June 12, 2009 at 7:10 am

No, no and no. I’m not fond of flash­backs and they seem to be in every third book I read. There are occa­sions when they work but they must advance the sto­ry­line. Julia Spencer-Fleming did a won­der­ful job with flash­backs in ‘Out of the Deep I Cry’, but this is an excep­tion. Flash­backs don’t pre­vent me from read­ing a book but I usu­ally sigh if I see them.

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